老師是園丁，辛勤的培養(yǎng)著我們這些含苞待放的花骨朵;老師是蠟燭，點亮學(xué)生，耗盡自己。我們應(yīng)該感謝老師，你想對老師說什么呢?

　　I want to thank you,teacher

　　I want to thank you.You are the one of brightest stars in the sky.I want to thank you,you teach me how to do well in all things.

　　I want to thank you,you give me advice about how to be a top student.Thank you Mrs Xu.When I have trouble,you will give me a helping hand and have a rest with the help of you.

　　My English has improved much.In the word I really want to thank you.

　　點評：作者直入主題，每一句都在寫感謝，語法用的過少，也可以插入一些其他的話。不過對于老師的幫助寫的還是很全面的，學(xué)生很細(xì)心。