每個(gè)人在成長的路上都會(huì)收到禮物，有的禮物是實(shí)物，有的是虛擬的、精神層面的。不論是什么禮物，我們都該倍感珍惜，感謝送我們禮物的人。你認(rèn)為父親給你們最好的禮物是什么呢?

　　The Present My Father Gave Me

　　When I was young,my father ,who always taught me how to be a true man,told me that it is essential to be tolerant in your life whatever happens.

　　And that remains the most valuable present he gave me,I think To be tolerant, I need to keep calm when great trouble lies in front of me,however difficult it is to overcome it; To be tolerant ,I need to resist the temptation of all kinds of the outside world,even if it is so attractive; To be torlerant, I need to pull myself, in times of extreme sorrows and joys, no matter how they affect me.

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：語法正確，全篇用了很多完美的句子，也道出了父親送的禮物是什么，寫的很好。