家庭是我們快樂生活的地方，有了父母的照顧我們才能健康成長，讓我們來用英語描寫下家庭吧，讓我們永遠(yuǎn)愛我們的家。

　　《a photo of my family》

　　This is a photo of my family.It was taken in the Ocean Park by a tourist last year.Look!People who is in the picture is smiling!

　　The woman who is standing in the front is my mother .She is young.She is a teacher of Liannan Primary School.The man who is near that building is my father .He is a doctor.He works very hard.He often tells us:"Money isn't almighty .Money can buy a lot of things but knowledge, precious time, true love and so on.If a man has none of this ,though he has a lot of money,he is still poor.So I don't wat you to be like this!"

　　That boy sitting in the middle is me! I study in Liannan Primary School.I like reading and playing basketball.

　　This is my family.We are happy family!

　　點評：通過照片的方式來對家庭人員進(jìn)行介紹，是個不錯的思路。每個句子都正確，看出作者十分用心。