2011年6月18日下午四六級(jí)落下帷幕,酷學(xué)網(wǎng)將于第一時(shí)間為考生收集整理最新試題及答案,以下為六級(jí)高分范文:
The Certificate Craze
There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailingtrend for people to take part in various exams with the purpose of obtaining certificates of many kinds: that forCET-4 or CET-6, that for computer level, the driver’s license,etc。
Of course people pursue certificates for various purposes. Someclaim that owning these certificates can give them more edge incompetition. One more certificate means a bit more chance of winning in the job market. Others, however, merely take this practice as a stimulus for them to study or study harder. They assert that, by working for those certificates, they can broadentheir horizon and enrich their knowledge。
Personally, I believe that one should choose to learn what he or she truly likes or really needs, instead of merely working for some certificates.As for me, I shall focus my energy on a few fields, for I believe concentration of attention and energy is the key to success.Besides, keen interest is the strongest motivation for study. To bespecific, I would like to learn kungfu and Beijing Opera inmy spare time. I may attend some relevant tests and be awardedcertain certificates, but they are just a natural result of mystudy, instead of my motivation。
點(diǎn)評(píng):
本次六級(jí)作文探討的是考生比較熟悉的話題——高校考證書熱;本次試題延續(xù)了以往的考試風(fēng)格,關(guān)注點(diǎn)仍然放在與學(xué)生息息相關(guān)的話題上;從選題角度來(lái)說(shuō),考生還是比較好把握的。需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多點(diǎn)原因,考生在該部分需要注意論述的條理性;此外,在保證句法通順的前提下,盡可能做到表達(dá)的多樣化。
首先,在考生拿到題目的時(shí)候,應(yīng)該先認(rèn)真審題,心里大致對(duì)接下來(lái)文章的安排有一個(gè)底。提起證書熱的話,很多考生都會(huì)聯(lián)想到就業(yè)壓力,學(xué)校給予的壓力以及學(xué)生自身的需求;因此,全文可做如下安排;
第一段,考生陳述了目前社會(huì)人們因不同的目的去考證,因此存在的考證熱現(xiàn)象;
第二段,考生對(duì)考證熱的目的進(jìn)行了詳細(xì)闡述:人們的考證的目的不盡相同,更多人是為了就業(yè)更有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力;但還是有少數(shù)人是為了鍛煉和檢測(cè)自己,為了學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程而參加考證的。
第三段,考生表明了自己的觀點(diǎn)。
綜合來(lái)講,本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確,思路清晰,此外,文章中有用到不少的亮點(diǎn)詞匯;唯一比較遺憾的是,由于時(shí)間和篇幅的限制,論證的展開(kāi)還未完全挖掘出來(lái),但在如此有限的條件下,可以稱得上佳作了。