2011年上半年大學(xué)已于6月18日結(jié)束,酷學(xué)網(wǎng)考試頻道將于第一時間收集整理試題及參考答案,供考生參考,以下為四級范文:
Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, it’s convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience。
Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating。
For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing。
點評:
作者在第一段描述了網(wǎng)購作為一種時尚給大家的生活帶來了便利,然后話鋒一轉(zhuǎn),說網(wǎng)購仍然取代不了面對面的購物交流。
第二段主要還是從正反兩方面分析了網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)勢和不足,以此描述大家對網(wǎng)購的不同反應(yīng)。
第三段作者表明了自己的觀點,對網(wǎng)購的便利和不足之處都做了描述。
綜合來講,本篇文章觀點明確,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,語言表達很通暢,文中也有不少閃光點-----優(yōu)美詞匯和詞組結(jié)構(gòu)。但是,考生在最后一段表達自己觀點的時候,沒有清楚明確的表達,導(dǎo)致自己最后的觀點模棱兩可。在此提醒考生,在表達自己觀點的時候立場要堅定,直接了當?shù)谋砻髯约旱挠^點。