教師是園丁培養(yǎng)著我們這些花朵，下雨老師就是雨傘，黑暗里老師就是蠟燭，迷茫中老師就是指路明燈。老師幫助過(guò)我們每一個(gè)人，老師對(duì)你最大的幫助是什么，用英文敘述一下。

　　National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May. And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.

　　I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine ang smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our buliding.

　　Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she aslo told me that's very common like many yong people of my age. She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can't remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!!!

　　Another teacher's day,to all the teachers,to our parents.

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：開(kāi)頭認(rèn)識(shí)到老師的重要性，通過(guò)自己迷失方向時(shí)老師與自己的互動(dòng)，表達(dá)老師的偉大。語(yǔ)法正確，詞匯沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤，是篇優(yōu)秀的文章。