英語六級(jí)范文《成功之路》，作者首段問：什么是成功?不同的人有不同的答案，對(duì)于“我”來說，成功就是做自己想做的事情-success is doing something one really feels like doing.第二段提出了成功的三條必由之路 "what”“why”“how”。本篇英語六級(jí)作文范文既有亮點(diǎn)也有不足，考生們可以好好學(xué)習(xí)它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)并避免缺點(diǎn)。
The Way to Success
Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. But have you ever considered what success is? Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power. It’s indeed one way to define success. But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing.
To achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream. In other words, they are “what” “why” and “how” of success. It’s really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful。
Although it’s never easy to succeed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, you’ll be the one。
【作文解析】
這是一篇議論文。作者首先提出問題”what is success?”，但并沒有在這個(gè)問題上著更多的筆墨，而是直接引出了自己的觀點(diǎn)：success is doing something one really feels like doing. 算是立意較為新穎的地方。隨后在第二段對(duì)這種成功背后的三種必要條件做出了闡述。整體看，行文流暢，用語規(guī)范地道。
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