2011年大學英語六級,最新收集整理供考生參考,以下為英語六級標準版作文范文及評析。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Certificate Craze. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 現(xiàn)在許多人熱衷于各類證書考試
2. 其目的各不相同
3. 在我看來
Part I Writing
My opinion on certificate craze
The growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, why’s the craze?
The reason behind this phenomenon is common — the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one’s ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another。
Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since they do not necessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quite naturally。
文章點評:
這是一篇“中等偏上”的學生作文。 本文先對學生的考證熱進行簡介,引出全篇;接著分析這一現(xiàn)象背后的原因;整體看思路清晰,邏輯嚴密,行文流暢,句式多變,用語較為地道。
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The growing tendency … has now evolved into…
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harsh job market
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